I need a business proposal in full detail and all the numbers have to make sense and be concise. I have supplied my work thus far which was deemed unacceptable and I have provided an example that is considered the gold standard. I need graphs and accurate number projections as well as number of teams and entry fees because for each team because my business proposal is for a soccer tournament showcase for high school kids to get noticed by universities as well as potential pro teams. No donations but real world approach as to how this project could be pulled off. The Gilmore business plan is the gold standard and I need to bring my proposal up to that standard, my proposal is the total football one. Change any numbers or descriptions needed to bring up to that standard.